Looking through my paper it is obvious that it needs some organizing and styling added to it.
My thesis was along the lines of, a good man is more than what you see on the outside, there are a collective factors that make up the person of a good man, and I believe in the case of O'Connors story, a woman too. Just reflecting, grandmother really brought out the or rather it was easy to see what a good man was not, I could not help but realise that everyone has some good in them its how the cultivate that aspect of human behaviour and turn it into something beautiful. Ms. Frailly mentioned having written to her brother and that they both bring out good and bad out of each other...I see the same for this story and I realise that I want to have a positive effect on people, especially the ones that I love. When we have the ingredients to life and relationships, it is so very important that we combine the right amount of seriousness, silliness, love and firmness which bakes together in the right kind of environment for a life long expense.
Having said all this, I have to remember to have my points and thesis at the start of each topic sentence and have my paper blend better, like coffee and creamer-- what is it with me with food and drinks! :)
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